Great! This is good, hopefully you're able to finish it one day. Only thing i would say regarding the mix is the low background strings sound kind of buried and squished at around the 20sec mark until the 40sec when they build fully. I would suggest turning them up a bit more for prominence or leave em out entirely until the full crescendo at 40sec. Though please don't think I'm trying to speak from a place of authority because i honestly have no idea what i'm talking about. This is a good song! Really epic