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It's a good song man, but idk maybe the speech sample could be buried a bit in the mix and turned down a bit, gets a little distracting. Maybe add some subtle reverb/delay. Drums could have been brought up a bit, snare sounded a bit flat. Maybe some eq could brighten it up a little, just as a tip. Though all in all not a bad song, i liked it. Keep it up

deadbea7 responds:

i agree with everything you said. this was literally my first attempt at using vocals. i've been working on a better version since i uploaded this. i was very aware of the shitty vocals, but i just couldn't figure out what i could do to fix it. but luckily you came along. i think turning it down or even removing a bit of it will help. thanks for your feedback, it's greatly appreciated for sure.

This is pretty cool stuff man! I actually liked the contrast of the "hard" drums with the soft melody. Maybe some eq to cut some low end to brighten it up a bit, it sounded a little "flat" but that could be what your going for idk. Other than that i thought it was a pretty chill track, I can dig the Aphex Twin influence. Keep up the music :)

Nice work man! A very euphoric track, and altogether a very impressive effort. Like the last reviewer mentioned i liked how you kept things fresh by changing it up. Great sound mix, fast and fun, i enjoyed it very much.

DJT3chnic responds:

:) Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.

Very cool, you did a great job with this man! I like the heroic main hook, it gets me pumped up haha.
This is awesome stuff.

Sounds like chiptune/video game song to me, which Newgrounds has a genre of that you can submit under.

i liked the song btw, the beats were cool. I liked the change in the middle, not sure about the end though it seemed a little out of place. The beginning got a little repetitive but i may just be being an asshole about it. It was an enjoyable song though, good stuff.

Qvarcos responds:

Hi, thanks for the review, appreciated!

I reupload it with a better ending, as i don't see that perfect either.

Excellent track, loved the build ups! Great trance leads and beat, altogether a very smooth track.

Pretty good man, keep up the good work.

Hey Tonash, i thought the fact how someone else`s art inspired you to create your own dramatic composition was pretty cool. The effects along with all the music immersed the whole experience. The script was great, and you do possess the kind of voice to carry this kind of material. The whole ``light of the sun, is no more`` opening voice with the background wind was awesome work, though i think the dwarf voice over work was not as strong, and the accents got a bit messy. Overall i thought you did a great job the script and story was concise and the threat of battle was well communicated. Keep refining your voice over skills, good luck with this!

Tonash responds:

I agree that some of Gimble's lines got a little messy; albeit dwarfy accents are usually more rocky/grumbly than usual.

Thanks again.

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